Improvements given on the Music Video

After handing in our first draft of the music video, we recieved feedback in which to improve our grade and general outcome of the video. Below is a list of what we were told to improve on:

• The narrative build up was too long
• Match the Tempo - When Harry opens the door add an effect to make his movements more distinctive.
• Keep everything up to where chloe blows the candle out.
• First 35 seconds need reworking - perhaps concentrate on Harrison performing. 
• Try switching the ending with the beginning 
• Include more of an verity of shots within the argument scene. 
• Be more creative slow parts up and speed some down. 
• Chop it up more. eg. gig scene
• Cut Harrison more into gig part 
• Stop the pit gig when music changes as it goes on for too long. 
• Make 2:46 onwards calmer Fade the ending out
• Letter box editing perhaps swap around images to get more included within it.